Date: 2014-07-20 11:07 pm (UTC)
I may post my own version of this, as I wrote one but never posted it. Though my Tonks isn't as forgiving.

Anyway, I loved how you wrote this. Honestly, I expected Andromeda to chew Remus out - so I was pleasantly surprised that she didn't. Instead, she welcomed him home, and told him she also understood Tonks loved him, and as her mother, she could respect that. It was very well-written and believable.



“Remus,” she said, finding his hand where it rested against her skin and covering it with her own. “Stop worrying. You’re already here.”


This made me smile.
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