This is perfect, and I love it very much! Thank you!
It's beautiful, and it says so much about what pulls Albus to Gellert in very few words. It's easy to sympathize with young Albus, finally meeting someone who matches his intellect and who's charming and full of energy, talking about the world out there and what they can acchieve.
Your prose is gorgeous, and I always love it when a fic makes me look up the dictionary :) The line that got to me the most, though, was this:
He held Gellert’s eyes, unafraid now, because Gellert had surely seen inside him, Gellert who saw everything, and he hadn’t run yet.
Oh, my heart...
You're amazing, thank you so much!
(And if this turns out to be part one of three, I'm all in favour of that :))
ETA: Sorry about the edits, obviously I can't type anymore...
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Date: 2015-01-03 11:21 pm (UTC)I'm dying!!
This is perfect, and I love it very much! Thank you!
It's beautiful, and it says so much about what pulls Albus to Gellert in very few words. It's easy to sympathize with young Albus, finally meeting someone who matches his intellect and who's charming and full of energy, talking about the world out there and what they can acchieve.
Your prose is gorgeous, and I always love it when a fic makes me look up the dictionary :) The line that got to me the most, though, was this:
He held Gellert’s eyes, unafraid now, because Gellert had surely seen inside him, Gellert who saw everything, and he hadn’t run yet.
Oh, my heart...
You're amazing, thank you so much!
(And if this turns out to be part one of three, I'm all in favour of that :))
ETA: Sorry about the edits, obviously I can't type anymore...