http://huldrejenta.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] huldrejenta.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starfishstar 2014-02-12 09:56 am (UTC)

This whole fic is so sad and heartwrenching, and it all rings so very true. Especially the interaction between Hope and Lyall; you've captured the guilt, the way Hope can't cope with her husband right away, and then their tentative way of finding back to facing this as a team. That was really well done!

And this:
Safely. As if there were anything safe about locking up her four-year-old child in the basement alone.

I can hardly think of much that would be worse for a parent than having to do this. Again and again. It sure says a lot about Remus's strength - and about his parents probably as well - that he grew up to be the person that he did.

Excellent job!

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